The evilest evil that ever did evil ([info]remember_nomore) wrote in [info]simply_shiny,
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Storm's Comin' - Lindsey McDonald - PG-13

Title: Storm's Comin'
Character: Lindsey McDonald
Fandom: Angel the Series
Word count: 606
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Spoilers for NFA
Disclaimer: I don't own him [Sadly]. Just having fun here. Quote in italic's is from 1x21 - Blind Date.
Authors Note: Written for [info]licenseartistic using Picture #2


He sat on the edge of the roof, his legs hanging off like a rag doll in the wind, the knowledge that he could fall not lost to him. He knew all to well that anything could happen and he could die at any moment even if he wasn’t on this roof, that’s the hidden charm of LA.

Looking out at the skyline Lindsey watched as the overcast fell over the city. The clouds dark and thick like ash, looking as if they’d choke you if you breathed too deeply. The dark would creep into your bones and live there till it killed you slowly from the inside out, hollowing you till you were nothing more than a shell.

Even without the clouds the city would choke the life out of you; he knows because he’s been here for years. Lindsey knows what lurks in the shadows because there was a time when he made those shadows; when he worked for the all knowing evil that ran this town; Wolfram & Hart.

Looking out at the darkened sky as it grew darker; unnatural for the weather and he knew that it was the Partners brewing. Angel and his gang weren’t the only one’s preparing for a fight; the Partners were smarter than they were given credit for.

Lindsey knew Angel was still underestimating them and what they were capable of even with him knowing what they have done in the past. You would think that between bringing Darla back and rewriting the fabric of time so his son Connor could have a normal life would be enough for Angel to make them realize.

It wasn’t enough and Lindsey knew it; that’s why he came back. He came back and used Spike as a puppet in the theater of LA to show Angel what he should be doing out on the streets of LA. Not sitting behind a desk like he used to.

His plan when he came back was never to kill Angel – but to say otherwise would have been laughable – his true reason was to help him and make him see what it’s all about. Granted in the end Lindsey ended up getting his ass handed to him by Angel and then by the Senior Partners, but it worked in the end. His final goal was to make Angel wake up and see the big picture and that all that glitters inside that building was nothing but a distraction.

Angel knew now, everything was coming slowly into focus – for both sides – and there was a war brewing that would make everything else they faced like a day on the playground. Lindsey knew the most about the firm than anyone alive and for once he was going to step up and do something.

”…I swore to myself that I was not going to be the guy standing there with the stupid grin on my face - while my life got dribbled out...”

After all these years he was finally going to live up to those words and take as much control as he could. He was in deep with all the wrong choices he’d made but as long as he had a heartbeat he still had a chance.

There was the crack of thunder in the distance and Lindsey knew it was time to go. Shaking his head he moved off the edge of the building before heading towards the door. He paused when he got to the door, glancing behind him and taking one last look over LA, finally seeing it for what it really is. “Storm’s comin’; nobody’s coming out of this one alive…”
Tags: angel the series - lindsey mcdonald

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  • 12 comments

[info]denied_heaven

April 2 2006, 09:28:53 UTC 6 years ago

iiiiiiieeee
*shivers hard and hugs him tight*
this was just..
guh
awesome

[info]remember_nomore

April 2 2006, 15:02:05 UTC 6 years ago

I adore when you give me feedback. You so feed my little ego.

Thanks so much hon, I was a bit hesitant writing it but after looking at the picture for more than an hour I said the heck with it. :)

[info]strangecreature

April 2 2006, 15:32:44 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, fantastic! I didn't know this is what you were up to! *g*

Love the atmosphere... it goes really well with that picture-prompt... and the last line there is just killer. *tight hugs*

[info]remember_nomore

April 2 2006, 15:35:48 UTC 6 years ago

Weeeeeeeee. MegFeedback! *dance* Yes, this is what I was up to. I now can offically add Lindsey to my character list. *facepalm* I was gonna make you work for it but you went poof on me last night. lol. And I know you have my Lin journal friended so there was no hiding this.

Ty sweetie, I was a bit nervous about this but like you said, it fit with the picture. That was the first thing I thought of when I saw the picture so I just couldn't not do it.

*grin* Yes, me and my killer last lines.

*snuggles and cuddles you*

[info]whiskyinmind

April 3 2006, 11:27:48 UTC 6 years ago

found you via [info]su_herald. Wow. This was wonderful stuff - a great insight into the mind of Lindsey. Kudos!

[info]remember_nomore

April 3 2006, 12:20:07 UTC 6 years ago

Thank you very much, this was real fun to write and it's my first real attempt at him.

I've written a lot of other things the past few weeks - mostly Lindsey - that the herald hasn't tracked that you're free to look around to take a read at.

[info]whiskyinmind

April 3 2006, 12:25:34 UTC 6 years ago

Ooo - I will do!

D'you mind if I rec it at [info]pygs_lj as well?

[info]remember_nomore

April 3 2006, 12:28:01 UTC 6 years ago

Dude, you made my day. *grin* I have never been recced before and I've been writing for over 10 years...

Yes, feel free. Thank's so much.

[info]whiskyinmind

April 3 2006, 13:29:28 UTC 6 years ago

You're more than welcome!

[info]prophcygrl

May 4 2006, 10:05:29 UTC 6 years ago

Fantastic, sweetie! I really love this, so very very vivid! ::huggles you tight::

[info]canadiangoddess

October 21 2008, 01:45:11 UTC 3 years ago

*shudders* the imagery in this blows my mind. it's dark and broken, but with an amazing realism. bravo.

[info]remember_nomore

October 21 2008, 01:52:21 UTC 3 years ago

TY honey. It was from the first time I ever thought to try to write Lindsey head on.
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